Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
Proponents of death penalty emphasized the importance of this law against perpetrator of heinous crimes while the opponents of capital punishment argued that this is inhumane. I agree that death penalty is considered an ultimate cruelty and must be rejected. This essay will both discuss the disadvantages and advantages of capital punishment followed by my opinion.
On one hand, more countries have turned their backs on death penalty due to some disadvantages. Firstly, this punishment is irreversible, too absolute and no way for further evidence that may be revealed. This may lead to people paying for crimes they did not commit. Secondly, capital punishment will show the absolute power of the state and the government cannot be trusted to provide a fair due process. In the past, there are several cases of executions that later been found to be wrongfully executed. The authority of the governments to implement death penalty to its citizen is an immense power to be enjoyed by politicians. Therefore, the support for capital punishment must consider issues such as political influences and unfair trials that may derail the fair process.
On the other hand, proponents say the death penalty is advantageous to the peace and order situation of society. Advocates states various examples on how this punishment directly affect the crime rate. Apparently, giving a killer the mandatory death sentence will discourages potential criminals from thinking of committing such crimes. Another example is that capital punishment can properly deliver justice to those who have killed and to bring closure for the pain to a victim’s family. However, these advantages entirely violates religious teachings on the sanctity of life as a gift of God that even a criminal has the inviolable right to life.
In summary, although death sentence has some advantages, I believe that this unusual punishment has no deterrent effect on crime even after executions of criminals. In addition, surviving family’s pain does not disappear with the perpetrator’s death.
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