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IELTS Writing Task 2: International Music

2018 Coachella Valley Music And Arts Festival - Weekend 2 - Day 1

There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

Music is known as the universal language of the world, you do not need to study the language to understand it and there are many different types of music genre around the globe that we can all enjoy. This essay will firstly describe why the world need music, and then distinguish which of these two, the traditional music or the international music are more important.

To begin, music prompts people in every culture around the world to dance and express how they feel and celebrate life and at the same time to cry in time of grief and sorrow. Humans is highly emotional being and music can possibly calm feelings of hatred and offers positive health effects and encouragement.  Through music, people from different culture connects, musicians for instance, express themselves through songs and convey how they are feeling in life, while listeners relate them in every word of the lyrics and find comfort in the sweet melodies. Music become a significant communication tool, it adds meaning to life and unite mankind.

Further, traditional music is considered a songs that usually uses distinctive ethnic traditional instruments while international music are widely played in recent years and it comes in different musical genre such as country, hip-hop and pop to name a few.  In my view, international music is more important nowadays especially in the business side of the music industry. Over recent decades, music industry become part of the open-trade or globalization in music and with the emergence of social media, famous concert artist all over the world can easily moved and perform in different countries. All performances involved huge amount of money that went to the host country and trickled-down to the lower class of the society. The touring concerts are significant tourism events that create economic activities that lead to job opportunities for local labor pool.

To conclude, people need music to express feelings and relate themselves the meaning to life. In addition, international music makes every life glow and create economic activities for the local communities. Therefore, international music is more important in recent years due to lucrative economic benefits in the society.

 

Rating from http://www.writingbands.com

Overall Score: 7
Vocabulary Score out of 2: 1.75
Sentence Score out of 3: 2.45
Structure Score out of 1: 0.7
Content Score out of 3: 2.1

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