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IELTS Writing Task 2: The benefits of cosmetic surgery

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INCREASING NUMBER OF PEOPLE ARE CHOOSING COSMETOLOGY SURGERY TO IMPROVE THEIR APPEARANCE. 

WHAT ARE THE REASONS? DO YOU THINK IS IT A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT?

Plastic surgical innovations greatly molded the present landscape of cosmetic surgery. This medical advances rapidly gaining popularity among millennials that are heavily influenced by Western cultures and social media. I think that these advances and breakthroughs in the field of cosmetic surgery is a positive development for those who want to enjoy genuine improvements not just in body shape but also in enhancing their self-esteem.

At present, many people suffer from low-self-esteem characterized by lack of body confidence and feel poorly about themselves as they compare their body image to an ideal body shape portrayed by the media. The social environment has a significant influence on individuals’ desire to undergo a procedure. Bullying is one motivating factor for people to undertake cosmetic surgery. One of the most common and popular surgery among women is rhinoplasty or commonly known as “nose job”. Rhinoplasty is usually performed to enhance the appearance or reshapes the nose to correct breathing problem and other related medical reasons. Scar revision, on the other hand is a surgery to make scar become less noticeable, restores function and correct skin changes caused by an injury, wound poor healing or previous surgery.

Clearly, physical appearance is an important aspect of personal identity and cosmetic surgery can have a positive impact on patient quality of life. Although, cosmetic procedures is frequently impugned by critics as being frivolous and lacking in substantive benefit. However. a study indicates that cosmetic interventions has positive long-term effects on appearance-related aspects. Patients can gain high self confidence in their body after the surgery and tend to increase productivity in the workplace. The physical benefits are immediately noticeable. In addition, psychological benefits can be many times be greater than the physical rewards.

To sum up, when a person become unsatisfied with their body image it will greatly affects a person’s self-worth, the potential rewards of plastic surgery are highly individual. However, patient should be aware that the surgery should be performed by a highly qualified surgeon. Although, surgeons’ expertise cannot add years to patients life, but without a doubt plastic surgery can add life to patients years.

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