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IELTS Writing Task 2: Living in big cities

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Some people believe that living in big cities has become more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is in the cities where the best ideas of the country are incubated, implemented and cities stand as laboratories of innovation. However, many people think that settling down in mega cities become a challenge recently, in contrary, there are some people says that it is more comfortable to live in the large cities nowadays. This essay will go into both sides of the story and disclose my opinion in this subject.

To begin with, major cities are apparently densely populated fueled by migrants moving to the city from nearby states. The majority end up in settling in sprawling slumps that causes several problems in community.  Firstly, temporary settlements inside big cities usually become the hideout of law offenders and criminals, it causes numerous criminality issues in the city such as robberies, homicides and violence associated with drugs. Overcrowded inner cities make it more difficult for authorities to control the violence and enforce the law. The second difficulty could be the environmental pollution, the air quality in cities is extremely poor and so as inadequate potable water supply . Environmental problems in large cities are growing especially in developing countries. Obviously, city residents these days face difficulties, especially for those living within the poverty line.

However, major cities tend to be vibrant with so much activities going on that attract educated and dynamic people. Living in the cities offers myriad of opportunities, jobs for instance, as a financial center it is more easier to find  a high paying jobs as there are more companies offers excellent career opportunities with lucrative benefits. In addition, cities usually have excellent transport systems, best universities, high-tech and luxurious hospitals and high-end shopping complexes.  People who live in the city experienced easier access to their needs and wants and medical care during emergencies. In my opinion, living in the large cities at present is becoming more convenient and easier. Children in cities have much more access in education, people have more career choices and different food choices. Living in the city means you are closer to everything and that makes life more easy and convenient.

To sum up, there is no doubt that people encountered difficulties in living in the cities . Nevertheless, it is viewed that a strong government stance to those who violate the laws will result to a peaceful solution on criminality and environmental problems that will lead to a more safer and healthier city living .

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Overall Score: 6.5
Vocabulary Score out of 2: 1.62
Sentence Score out of 3: 2.28
Structure Score out of 1: 0.65
Content Score out of 3: 1.95

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6 replies »

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