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IELTS Writing Task 2: Increasing crimes

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime?
How can we deal with those causes? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Every country defined crimes in different ways, basically, crime in general can simply be defined as breach of one or more laws laid down by ruling authorities in respective countries. The growth of crimes are noticeable all over the world especially in third world countries. This essay will verify and highlight the causes that lead people to commit crimes and ways to reduce or prevent violence.

Studies shows that overpopulation is the biggest cause of crime and much of the world’s worries. The rise of crime rates are associated with a higher population growth in every areas especially when the growth is rapid like in developing countries. Unemployment is one of the major socio-economic problems, this situation tend to encourage not just petty crimes such as theft and robberies but also criminal activities including murder, rape and kidnapping. People will be triggered to commit crimes due to lack of basic necessities and criminals become motivated to indulge in a crime as means of livelihood. The crime rates however, varies from place to place depending on the population on those areas.

Fortunately, curbing crimes cause from overpopulation had been properly identified with measures and recommendations have been taken to eradicate and give tough stance to those who violated the laws. Governments for instance, takes tougher penalties against crime offenders like murder and rape. In other countries mostly from middle-east, the death penalty is implemented by hanging the criminals in public places.

In conclusion, the rapid growth of crimes in overpopulated areas developed an insecurity problems posed by the criminals and the situation are becoming more grievous, hence, policy makers and law enforcement agents are encourage to put an appropriate intervention programme to control criminality and prosecute the offenders.

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